Crumbs From the Corner: Adventures in Woolgathering

Saturday, October 20, 2007

Designer Shoes


You, with designer shoes on your feet—have you lived?
—gone barefoot once, in the early chill
of dawn, and climbed to the top of a hill;
felt the soft, wet grass between your toes
and watched the sun as it slowly rose?
You, with designer shoes on your feet—have you lived?


This is one of my own poems from eons ago; comments and thoughts are always welcome regarding any of my posts.

2 comments:

Cindi said...

Very nice! I own designer shoes but, I regularly walk around bare foot!

TheElementary said...

Thank you for your kind comment! I hope you enjoy the blog. It is always good to get feedback, especially on my poems.

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